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Agripas Street Jerusalem -010209



Center Weighted Metering. Tmax Developer 7 minutes, Tetenal Super Fix, without hardner. Hypo wash. Scanned Negative scan on MicroTex 120ff

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I'm sorry Meir but I have to disagree. I just read your bio and you are not only a photographer but a very good one. Good photographers produce good work consistently. That's what you do, go figure. The above is just more proof of that.
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Walking people! OK, I don't know why that is an important subject but I do know that they are walking off the right side of the page. My eyes enter at left, scan across and I am ready to go to the next picture. Good composition would make the eyes want to explore the picture a little more. May I suggest cropping the picture between the girl with white jacket and the couple to the right. I would crop it right along the brightest vertical line between them. Then I would remove some of the top and some of the bottom to keep the original ratio of the image. Try holding pieces of paper to your computer screen and see if you don't think this makes the figures remaining more interesting to look at.
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