Jacqueline 7605

Thoughts?

Great portriate Doug, the light coloured leaves behind her head bring out the beauty in the girl. Really great composition for me.

 

What I do find is that my eyes follw where she is looking and down to her hand expecting her to be holding something like a small daisy or playing with a blade of grass.

 

Anyway, great job.

Thanks Ian,

 

Good point about the eye line. I've been trying to figure out what's been bothering me about this shot, and that's what it is. --Doug

 

 

Well, to me she was actually playing with some blade of grass or such... It is not absolutely necessary that we see this blade of grass... A daisy was a good idea tho... but anyway, these are small matters to me, because all else really works great... Background light and colors are wonderful... A little technical note: some artificial blurring occurred here, but watch the grass left and right of her waist. Something isn't quite the same on the two sides, and that requires a little touch up imo. Cheers.

Dear Doug very nice image!

Thanks Kemil.  And your portfolio: Amazing!  Count me as your newest fan.