Jacqueline 6990

Thoughts? Suggestions?

Nice soft lighting and the pose is well done. The right hand, however, looks amputated and distracts me. I would also have done something to tuck the back of her shirt in.

 

J

Good points. I didn't recognize those things when I posted it, but I must have seen them during shooting because 11 frames later I made this one:

http://photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=8454792

Very nice image - will done but does the logo need to be that prominent? Why put it there at all? If it is advertising, we are not your target market.

"Good points. I didn't recognize those things when I posted it, but I must have seen them during shooting because 11 frames later I made this one"

 

That's funny, after I commented I went to your gallery and saw the one you mention. I was going to repost but didn't. I figured, chalk another one up to foot in the mouth :-).

 

Very nice shot.

 

J

Understandable. I'm continually trying to swish the taste of feet from my breath.