ricardovaste 0 Posted December 29, 2008 Interesting idea. I like it. The contrast between the blur and sharp objects work well, as does the background. I think making the composition more symmetrical would make it a stronger photo, thats all though. Very good! Rich Link to comment
vaar 0 Posted December 31, 2008 It is interesting - specially how "cones" of strings light/vibration "intersect" in the upper part. Bridge is very prominent and takes a lot of attention - not sure if that was your intention. I would have tried to bring more of violin into focus - even more than in your other similar photo. There are other small distractions too - e.g. yellow on leftmost (G) string. I like tonality of the violin top in this one better. Link to comment
biskamp 1 Posted December 31, 2008 Thank you for the comments. Vardan, this is a superposition of two images, one with open aperture and the focus on the bridge, where the strings are naturally in rest, one with closed aperture. You are right, the yellow edge of the G-string is a bit perturbing, I should have desaturated this spot Link to comment
xavier farre 0 Posted January 8, 2009 Good photo. I would try to remove the yelow stuff on the first string. Link to comment
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