a troubled house

thank you as always for your time and observations...

very nice potrait with nice lighting, me complaint is that the model's emotion does not match with the image's title. Her face is too tense, looks like she's mad and uncomfortable or forced to sit in this corner.

I agree with previous comments about a mood/composition mismatch. My main thought as I look at this shot is what your model would like with her head down, appearing to be in thought...more contemplative and kind of hiding away in her mind. I think she only looks uncomfortable because she is looking at the camera. One thing that strikes me as successful about this picture is the cropping. I like that you chose to keep a bit of the tree showing. the light and location are great.

I have given it a more appropriate title

Funny how that makes such a difference. Fits perfectly. Wonderful portfolio, by the way. Absolutely beautiful.

 

Cameron