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Critiques appreciated.

Interesting pose. Nice light on the face. Not sure what I think about the light on the body; it's very harsh, and looks clipped. It's certainly not flattering, but perhaps you had other goals.

This is meant to be more dramatic than glamorous.

 

Jim Phelps

This picture calls out for Tri-X. I like your intent here, but the blown-out areas here are, for me, rather like turning up your stereo so loud that the speakers start buzzing. It doesn't help the music. But without the pure white areas, and without the odd color casts where your sensor is losing channels (her right leg -- camera left -- looks like it's got a giant bruise to me), I think your dramatic idea would work very well.