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pls criticise as much as possible. The reason the image is flat in

terms of color is cos there's mould on my scanner :)

upper right is too dark.

 

Pose looks good, nice expression on model's face.

 

I like the way the texture of the palm tree trunk is captured.

 

A little digital manipulation could probably really make this pic better.

I dont think the upper right is too dark if you just crop off the left edge so you can see just a little bit of the light on the tree trunk. It really helps define the lines of the whole peice and I dont think it would be as strong if you lightned it up. And I think the very tips of her fingers are cropped off.