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A few impressions, Tiffany. The rendering looks like a pencil sketch (nice). The composition is tight (your style) but Shayne's back, rather her shirt dominates in a way that causes her feet and hair to become points of interest. Thinking out loud, maybe sitting on the floor, back against the sidearm, or even sitting on the sidearm, both profile view, might have addressed this.
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a very interesting study/capture

 

I do like the movement and light play with the fabrics

 

compositionally, it gets attention and that's a good thing here

 

the tattoo draws my eye.. possibly it's a key element for the subject? It has weight in this particular composition

 

nicely done

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Ahmet...Michael...Floriana and Frederick..thank you for all the comments. Everything you have noted helps me. Michael...intention...this was one that made itself...I don't know how or why I did it. I do know that when I looked at the original file...I was drawn to the hair...tattoo and feet. I liked that and hoped to present it that way. Frederick...I guess the tatt means "jaded" in russian which I thought was interesting because there is such an innocence to Shayne....ah the youth. I guess I thought that I was jaded in my 20's and then after 30....things got really interesting. Floriana...I cherish your comments...you...the lady of the light!
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Nice capture..I like the soft dreamy effect...wonderful over the shoulder pose...that's the hook for me...I want to see beyond her to the bright space. Interesting and original.
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