John and Audrey 2

I'm attempting to create more I guess, editorial style images... this is a start...

I appreciate your thots as always!

If you mean commercial then I can see all the jewelry. The interest to me is the two male and female faces and you got them in the same plane and in focus and lit well and both are interesting faces indeede. I would enjoy this pair more perhaps if they were just head shots and nothing else as a photo subject alone from contest of advertising. Meaning it is a little complicated in the entanglement of the two hands. So posing is the area where you can make the most leaps and bounds I would say. Nice colors, soft skin and good models. Work on the hand positions is my thought. And decide which is the featured subject and let the man sort of be a spear carrier so to speak and just in but not as prominent. I encourage you, a great start with this kind of subject which is tough as you know. Wishing you well. gs