Portrait #1

I like what your trying to accomplish here!! I would suggest a little more lighting along the side by the hair. Also, the roses are competing with the model for our attention. I wonder if she were wearing a black sweater so the roses are not lost on the same color background what the result would be. Or, perhaps a black sweater and only one rose strategically held as she takes in the scent either looking directly to it or in the distance as she is doing now.

Just some thoughts.

Tom

Here is another portrait I'd like you to review and

comment on. Thank you so much!