Kiana (repost)

Fairly new to portrait photography, but want to get into more studio

work. Comments and suggestions welcome - thanks!

Kim this is a wonderful portrait, I love it. This little girl is an angel.

Very beautiful portrait. I love her eyes. Good work. Regards.

Very nice! Wonderful expression, a bit funny too! Good work. regards

I would suggest, however, that it is a good habit to pay attention to the eyes. It is easy to let the scleras go dark. Here I dodged the scleras, and then used the sponge tool on desaturate to rid them of the yellowish cast.

 

If you don't find this critique useful, just email me and I will be happy to delete it.

I see what you mean about the eyes, Steve. Your version is much better and I can really see the difference. Thanks! I fixed it and reposted.

Perfect portrait!

Cute photo Kim! I will watch for the re-post to take effect to see your update with the eyes.

Here's the "before" shot Steve fixed...

Beautiful! Actually, I prefer the before fix one, it looks much more natural. Either way, little Kiana is such a beauty!