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Thank you for stopping. Comments and critiques are appreciated.

.. very good artwork ...

Interesting placement of the harpist, Tiffany. I'll comment on a couple of issues I noticed, first is her missing left foot which looks a little unnatural. The other is the texturing of the entire background that removes the sense of depth. Intuitively, maybe creating an artificial boundary just behind the cloth-draped chair and texturing each surface separately (with a little shadow) will restore the perception of 3 dimensions.

Thank you Ahmet and Michael. Yes...it would be nice to have her foot. I always forget about those darned things! Actually...in this instance...it didn't bother me ...not like it would if it were on black. At least we can see the gathering in the fabric....but I should pay more attention next time. This was actually the last piece of the shoot. It took awhile to come together. I thought that this was a midpoint but when I looked at it again...I kind of liked it with the big flat space as if the harpist and the instrument are the only depth and dimension in the space. There! That's my story and I'm sticking to it! (>8

Its very good,

really like the composition

 

great work

 

regards /Sandra