asylum project Brooklyn Navy Yard Hospital, March '08

I'd appreciate a critique on this photo, taken in the early AM in the

old Brooklyn Navy Yard Hospital building.

Nice POV. I like the lines and the way my eye follows the stairway.

Excellent shot. Besides the nice textures and the pail color palette perfectly balanced for this kind of shots, I am intrigued by the two doors. The one on the top is mysterious and almost disturbing and makes me wonder what's inside the room. The one on the bottom, very contrasting with the light on, says that a person is about to appear and walk through it.

My first thought was to see it in b & w as it seems to fit the mood and the lines. Have you tried it and if so, I'd love to see your conversion.

 

deb

I hope you don't mind, but I wanted to see what it would look like and this is what I came up with in b & w.

 

deb