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The stairs


Johan Hannes

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Connected by deborah elaine barrie 2009©

 

 

You can never

 

Go home again

 

He hadn’t

 

Wanted to

 

Home

 

Was some place

 

He wanted

 

To forget

 

He pushed back

 

All the emotions

 

Rising up

 

Inside of him

 

He wasn’t

 

Connected

 

Or so he

 

Thought

 

Until now

 

Standing here

 

Looking

 

At the spot

 

Where he

 

Had spent

 

So many hours

 

Sitting

 

And dreading

 

What awaited him

 

Outside

 

That door

 

He knew now

 

That he was

 

Connected

 

He had to admit

 

He did some

 

Dreaming

 

On those stairs

 

Too

 

Dreams

 

That changed

 

His life

 

And made him

 

Who he was

 

Today

 

You can never

 

Go home again

 

No

 

He was here

 

And home

 

Was long gone

 

Unlike the pain

 

That welled up

 

Inside of him.

 

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This is a lovely shot with great tones and contrast between the lit part and the rest of it. well done, regards, RK!
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A very well done image!

 

I love the light added around the base of the banisters in the lower right hand corner for example. It strengthens the shadows from the virtical railings and leads the eye around to the stairs.The light on the stairs is lovely too with its careful gradient across from left to right!

 

I love the angles in the shot too - Beautifully done!

 

The light through the window at the top of the stairs is a little too bright for me though (personal taste on that one) but it anchors the image well.

 

The only thing I'd think about tweaking is the light at the top edge of the image as this might be better darkened down a touch more.

 

Overall a pretty faultless image IMHO!

 

Absolutely Beautiful! :o))

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Beautiful image and fantastic treatment. 'Light' plays such a pivotal role in this composition. My mind is 'full of story' possibilities that this image evokes. Impressive work!

Sincere regards, Gail

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