"Avondvrucht" (Fruit of the evening) Berries in evening light, before a storm

This is my first image I am submitting to this site and would like to

know what people think of it in terms of technical execution and

conceptualisation. I made this photo trying to convey the kind of

ethereal feeling that comes with an evening before a storm. The light

and composition were my main focus, as well as an experiment with

including a bokeh in the composition.

Hi, welcome to PN, I am fairly new here too and its exciting to be able to find out what people think of our creations. Firstly I would like to say that I really like this picture, I like silhouettes. I think it reminds me of christmas eve, watching the sky for father christmas to fly across. My only little suggestion is to get rid of the tiny white squiggles near the bottom and the one under the bottom branch on the right hand side.

Good job!