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I've had a look at your portfolio and there are many strong and well lit images there.

However, if there is a weekness throughout it is that the catchlights are too small or in some cases not present. You have demonstrated a masterful control of lighting throughout your portfolio so I ask if you intended this as a stylistic statement or not?

In this photo specifically I see multiple oblong streaky catch lights in the model's eyes. They are in a strange position and I find this odd and perhaps disturbing in as much as it does not fit with what is otherwise a very polished image. The iris and pupil are one continous black blob as well which could be improved.

Do not take this comment as a criticism per se, I would give most of your photos very high marks and feel that more attention to the eyes and catch lights would reduce the few small deductions.

Keep up the great work! - Terrance