Sara Hofer

Your critique requested.

Narinder

I'll comment on the good first. Whenever a photographer manages, as you have done, to get to the subject, to get her engaged, especially so young a model, to get her to display such raw emotional power, I consider it an achievent. That said, I think the image could be sharper, something you can certainly work on. There is, however, no denying the raw power of her face as you portrayed it. Nice job.

I think you have received good skintones and hair light is beautiful, nice work.

 

best regards Tore