mg 0 Posted September 6, 2008 What a smile ! This girl amazes me really each time I see a new picture of her... (Sigh!) :-) Well caught expression, neat all around, but perhaps I'd suggest again not going so tight at the bottom - or going a bit tighter at the top... And... I have a question... what that little blue reflection in her eyes: it grabbed my attention and wouldn't let go...:-) Perhaps change this blue into white or something...? Regards. Link to comment
dougityb 0 Posted September 6, 2008 this was shot horizontal, and cropped vertical using the entire height of the frame. Now that you mention it, it is a little unbalanced, isn't it? I'll look and see what I can do. The blue spot is sky. We were under the colonnade, and the sky opened up through an archway. Link to comment
dougityb 0 Posted September 7, 2008 There's no more head room. To reduce the amount of shoulders would tighten the crop, unless I ditched the square, but that would still tighten it up too much, I think. Link to comment
mg 0 Posted September 7, 2008 Yes. So this cropping is here to stay, it seems...:-) But it's ok, no big deal, I think. As for the sky in the eyes, no big deal either, but perhaps desaturating the blue and cyan in there a little would tone down its impact a little...? Link to comment
dougityb 0 Posted September 7, 2008 I suppose it would, but I kind of like the blue. it's interesting, (but maybe too interesting?). Link to comment
mg 0 Posted September 8, 2008 This bue is so strong that it becomes the main attraction in her eyes... Shouldn't the green be the main dish ? Link to comment
julio_segura_carmona1 4 Posted January 7, 2009 Excelente imagen. precioa luz y color, con un magnifico encuadre, saludos cordiales Doug. Link to comment
danbliss 0 Posted January 8, 2009 It is a beautiful, charming portrait. Nicely done. Dan Link to comment
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