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thanks for comments...

At first sight it seems appealing and nice. then I find the right hand side of the pic a little bit distracting. the lights and shadows of the backround are annoyingly unorderly and I don't know where to focus my eyes. I like the atmosphere and colors, the only snag is this background. regards, Tomasz

I could understand Tomasz' point of view and I could see that scene per se.

But when I looked second, third time.. I'd like to say that whatever may distract me make me now more and more interested. It is true - my eyes are jumping from background to girl and back. But then again - there is something in that very jumping.

Of course - classic way is to produce the topic and stick to it. But we're talking about the picture, not movie - and I feel like the story goes on. Some mystery, some "obviousness"... I don't mind to be engaged and work with captured moment.

What I really would love to get is a photo taken 5, 10, 60, 600 seconds after this one... But then the mystery may be gone.

 

Ah, there is one tiny little thing.. Despite the fact the picture is untitled you've wrote "...thinkin' of you". The secret revealed. Sadly :)