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Welcome comments and suggestions, thank you.

A little ambiguous to be romantic. The rather harsh light and close to back shadows does not enhance either subject as glamour per se. Eyes on her reclining face are not focused on him and he, for some reason, is looking at the camera,not at her;see what I am saying. You los t some more having to work with that cluttered and frankly dull background i my opinion. No sense of intimacy that I think you were after... I wish you well, truly, be not offended. Couples are tough in the best of circumstances.( I was once told to light each separately as if it were a single portrait).She is real cute and deserves to be more displayed, and her raven hair shown off...... gs

Thanks for the comments, no offense taken. I shot this couple in a variety of poses and lighting situations so I have other takes on it. This was at a workshop and we had certain areas to shoot in so that explains the tiny bathroom you see here.