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Thanks :)

Fantastic setting, model, composition, focus... but the slightly splotchy light is out to get you. Just a wee bit of fill flash, carefully used from high camera right, might just help even out her face a bit without having to do so much in post, which I think left that slightly odd tone there. Great idea and the sort of thing to really work on, because done with a bit more control of the light, it would be magazine ready to be sure.

Everything is great except the eyes, which throw the whole thing off for me.

The model looks professional and the clothes are very interesting and nice as the model herself, the environment is not usual for professional pictures of the kind, but also looks very good and of course is original, that narrow path is wonderful!

 

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Great fashion portrait...I really like the wild gypsy feel you've created here...beautiful colors in her clothes and great wild background. I like the action and her gaze is mesmerizing. Nicely captured.

Like fairy tale world with its colors. I like it.

Stunning! Love the mood, tone, comp, lighting, everything. And I think the eyes add that little bit of "something" to the photo :)

Love the colors and the setting. She belongs in a garden. She is a natural beauty and you have captured her well.