the high fells

added this cloud formation to add impact

Very original, looks dramatic and interesting. Maybe you should try reducing the grain in the clouds.

Would agree with Mr. Rodriguez that, if you can, reduce the grain in the clouds. You might want to try moving the cloud mass to the viewers right. From your portfolio I'd say you have a grasp of light and color so you also might want to try the Fells and the clouds if a better balanced tone, but maybe that is my computer screen.