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Sun and Steel II


robertbrown

Shot on bright afternoon with yellow filter. Developed and printed in home darkroom. Contrast readjusted in photoshop to match print.


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Comments, ratings, suggestions appreciated on this B&W shot.

Especially interested in suggestions on how to print this better.

Thanks.

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Interesting photo. The perspective distortion gives the impression of a collection of rectangles and triangles, but there is not a single 90 deg right angle in the photo! The mass of wires in the center is distracting.It represents curved lines while the dominant theme is rectangles. Very interesting location. Definitely worth a few more rolls of film!
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I like this very much; the subject matter is also a bit of a fetish of mine. I do find the large black triangle bottom right distracting, though. If you could get more detail in there, it seems to me it would probably improve substantially.
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Nice contrasts and good exposure. I like the varied textures and the depth created by the varied rooflines and walls. That deep, dark sky with the hint of clouds on the left addes to the effect.

 

The only thing I could do without is the cable across the lower left of the frame. I think the picture would have been stronger without it (OK, I know, you didn't exactly have any control over that).

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I like this a lot though I think the image is impacted by the tilt to the right and the lack of detail in the LRC. What a cool subject!
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Various cropping solutions are possible. There are couple of elements which don't allow achievement of perfection in wider contest. It's worth trying. The wires can be erased, also. Very interesting arrangement of elements. Good visual effect. Cheers.
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