Crystal

Any comments are much apreciated, thank you.

No offense to the girl, but I think I'd like this better if she weren't standing there. But then, I'm a sucker for old architecture B&W's. I guess I can't figure out whether your subject is the girl or the barn, and they're both losing that competition. Perhaps if the barn were out of focus and smaller (wider lens?), this would be a better portrait.

This is more of a symbolic portrait in that you need both subjects to be in focus and competing for space. I see what you are saying but this is what I wanted and this is what I got.