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by Peri John

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Gallery: Artistic Nudes in black and white 2

Tags: nude seeking critique

Category: Nude and Erotic

Published: Friday 30th of May 2008 03:20:15 PM


Comments

Marcelo Gutierrez
WOW nice composition, great textures, great toning great mg

Alberto Quintal
Excellent, perfect pose and B&W, John. Alberto

Mark Milberger
John .... I love the simplicity of your lighting. Everything always appears so comfortable

Antonio Díaz
Me gusta el blanco y negro y como lo has aplicado pues ayuda a recorrer todos los volumenes.

John S
Wow Nice tone and composition.

Jim Phelps
John, I like the way the B&W works here. The model's lines work well with the lines of the sofa. The similarity in tone between the model and the sofa enhances this interaction and creates a more "formal" image than most of your work. This use of lines is in some ways reminiscent of Edward Weston. However, the model's hair causes significant contrast and continues to bring my eye back to it. The image might have more impact if you cropped out some of the floor and wall to empasize the way her lines contrast with the sofa. I particularly like her pose! Kudos to you both. Jim Phelps

John Peri
Thnak you Jim, I would have liked just a little more detail in the hair, but I missed it with the flash. However, a slightly tighter crop as you suggest may better highlight the features as you suggest. Maby thanks.

John Peri
A contnued study .. .. of the reclining nude .. nothing even remotely original about this photo .. just the means of expression of the model which is infinite in it's variety ..

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