Church Gardens (revisited)

My sincere thanks to Paul Duffy, Stephen Penland & Ed Homan who all took time to comment (along very similar lines) on "issue 1" : I hope this version is an improvement ..... PLEASE SEE LARGER

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Yes, I think it's an improvement, and if you can push it even further in that direction, I think I would (about 30%-50% more, perhaps). Remember, however, this is entirely subjective and my comment is merely an expression of my preferences.