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Hello,

I tried to copy two of the greatest photographers; Bernd and Hilla Becher.

Still a long way to go, i know, but I think I somehow managed to use

the shape of the building.

What do you think of it?

 

Thanks for your time and feel free to browse through the rest of the

Ruhrgebiet-folder!

 

Pim

Pim, It is an interesting construction but the image is flat. I think it would be improved with a lower sunlight angle. As it is the balance is good and the repitition of the large pipes makes for good composition. - Roy

Hi Roy,

 

Thanks for your comment, I think you're right on the one hand, but on the other hand, the shadows would take the eye away from the pure form. (as it is doing now, by the way).

 

Pim