Pat and Crystal

Any comments are much apreciated, thank you.

Let me guess... He is steeling her bag and she laughs about it??????

Fun shot. Looks like a little purse strap tug-of-war.

Nice story, action. Soft light works for you. I feel the image could do with quite a bit more contrast. Undetailed blakcs are usually not a problem in b/w, and the midtones take over almost all your image.

She had deep roots in this land that gave her enormous power, she could play with poor thing for hours, days...Very good work.