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Critiques appreciated.

Hello Jim ! Nice composition, But I think the forground and background are to blown out , there fore taking away from the shadow and skin tones ???

Wow, what a good shot and a very beautiful model. Love the Tattoos!

Beautiful Jim, really, and what charm ....

 

to be just a little technical, though I only rarely even notice such details, I wonder if the blanket crossing the top of the buttocks is ideal. Either completely covered or bare might enhance the outline further. Another silly detail .. with such a wonderfully chiselled face, I would favour a little makeup to bring out the cheeks further ... otherwise really lovely, bravo.