Lust

Taken for a hair dressing project, supposed to be a stuart from the

50-60s.

Thank you for all critiques and ratings!!

 

Mvh Jeanette

I might have included a bit more of the 'bun' of the hair. This crop throws the balance and the eyes tend to focus on the guy's chin rather than the hair.

I have to disagree with my dear Friend David, despite his talent.

 

I think the crop here is excellent. I think you had to whack a bit of the bun to achieve the balance with the crop of the man's face. I frankly think your composition is wonderful. I have to wonder how it might have looked with her face in the sharp focus you have it in and his face somewhat out of focus. You might play with gausian blur tool in PS and see how it looks. In any event I think you did a hell of a job.

 

-Owen

you can really feel the desire. Great photo, Jeanette. Congrats!

Regards, Marina

hey , havent seen these, really like them, really technically well done , but also the composition is great, i would really like to see some more like this