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richard the potter

You have a subject that requires, even begs, no - screams out for some delineation of texture! But you have made it gray mud! Even the clothing is gray mud!

nothing that a bit of upping the contrast can't cure. It's a good portrait though

Am I right in thinking that you did want him to become part of the backround as your title might suggest? If not, I agree with Ton and Jerry. Still, I liked the composition...