Venla waits for the elevator

portfolio filling with casual styling in a carpark bunker. Comments

appreciated.

Well, there are things that I like here: Half diagonal composition, very good exposure in not so easy situation, good shines on the leather and the girl is probably my favorite of your models. I also like the set, it sort of frames her. The thing I don't like is the outfit contra the pose - it's like she'd been built from three replaceable parts: the legs, the mid torso and the part above the waist. I think it's actually the the lower edge of the jacket on the front side that interrupts her logical contours. The pose also makes me question about the height of her neck. But in anycase, I like the shot. You are truly very good at shooting on site with small master/slave-flashes.

Guess am I tired after the Tuuli/Ducati set? 570 kg of granite tiles in and out. Three days going all the time, keeping all the threads in my fingers. Looks very good initially. Just opened a can of beer and now I am sliding from the chair to the floor - zzzzzzz :)