Cafe Florian

Revisiting an old shot and trying to improve on some of its

inadequacies.

Outstanding, Peter! Maybe placing the sweeper a little more off center, or modifying the crop would create a little more tension in the image. Very minor, personal preference. Great shot! Harry

I waited for a shot like that at the top of the Campanile..I think the slight distortion breaks up the geometry of the rows pretty nicely, makes it more dynamic. The last row on the left, partially cut, bothers me just a bit.

Great shot Peter... I really enjoy the fact that you gave a little diagonal to those rows, I also think that the cut outside tables help closing the picture and bring the focus on the worker.

Not sure what the original shot was like and how much you had to play with, but I would either straighten the rows or make them more angled. It just looks a bit off either approach.

 

Donald and I will just have to agree to disagree :)

love this shot! and the cafe bears my name too. well that has to be a 7/7.

it's a cracking shot peter, really well seen and composed.

This capture intrigues me for its originality, technical effort and ability to grab viewer attention on a dime! All The Best, Catherine

A strong visual impact. Great shot ! Like it. Regards.

I like  this photo. Ciao