the serious artist; please critique

my daughter- posing as serious. great actress/model.

I love this :) Captures the moment.

Great expression. Light seems to be from behind. You could have perhaps opened this a stop for lighting the subject. And maybe crop it just above the car. But a nice shot. Nice highlights on the hair. Thanks for posting.

this is like the next photo on the roll with a fill flash included (sorry about the scanner mess).

Great expression! I don't know if the background adds anything to the portrait. I might have cropped in tighter or used a shallower depth of field.