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Thanks for coments and rates

Bruno, it's a very good one but still I think it would be better if you made an abstraction of it by cropping out that foreground and background and concentrate on that grey wall and red doorway.

To my eyes this could be called a genuine RGB photo, all the main colors present so clearly. I lone the asymmetrical framing the green and blue are creating and definitely prefer this version as I want to have some air, space to "breath". The cropped version is too tight. One should also note the blue line under the red facade together with the bluish window, they just need the clear blue sky included.

 

One thing I would correct here is the perspective. Such a frontal view would ask for more precision and in order to show what I mean, here is corrected version. I hope you don't mind doing this to. Vertical as well some horizontal correction and rotation were required. I did not crop my corrected version so that you could see how much one loose during editing, something one has to keep in mind while photographing (safety margin).

I would agree with Markku. Stay with the original cropping. I love the bit of blue sky and green grass bordering the photo. It is the right time of day for maximum drama.

 

Cheers, Leora