Oklahoma City Memorial 01

Part of a series of images taken at the Oklahoma City Memorial this past September. It's a place that every American really ought to make a point to visit. Please be brutally honest with me about these images. For example, on this one ... does the sky bother you? I had to totally tweak the perspective after using my wide lens ... was the tweaking effective? How about how dark the foreground elements are? Anything else?

Any comments or ratings are appreciated! :-)