Rachel

Comments welcome!

Lovely girl. Attractive pose and expression. Fairly sharp focus although I would like to see eyes sharper and brighter. Contrast is low. Consider cropping the lower two fingers. (The hand is partial to begin with). That will improve composition by putting each eye at the third. I did a quick contrast adjust and the crop. See what you think? Regards ifti

it did not let me attach the file I will try again

Beautiful.