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A found image


robert_kennedy

This is a retooling of an image I posted previously. I took the comments to heart and changed a few things.

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I posted this a few onts ago and then changed it as suggested. So

here we go for round two with the changed image. I cropped it a bit

tighter, and did some dodging and upped the saturation.

 

So now it is your turn to tell what you think.

 

Personally I like the soft glow of the tiles on the bones and the

diagonal positioning of the bones vs. the light.

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Mhh...

I found the bluish tone of the bone unnatural and very different from the tonal range of the tiles. The overexposed area on the lower right is very distracting to me.

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See, for me that is the appeal. The eye starts in the corner and THEN sees bone. But I could be fooling myself (has happened in the past).
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Since I didn't see the original, I will just comment on this one.

 

I like the interplay between the tile and skull as well as the fact that the skull is shaded. It would have been nice if you could have used some reflected light to brighten the skull a little, especially on the back side.

 

While I like the overall composition, I think it would have been stronger if the skull had been facing into the frame rather than out the left side.

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Ummm....hard to have it "face" into the frame as it doesn't have a face. It isn't a skull. It's a vertebrae. Do you mean have it turned towards the right?
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