In The Eye of the Beholder IV

thanks for your honest comments.

Nice classic table top, Rina! Nice composition. A few comments: The lighting seems a little flat and a touch too cool (window light?) A more directional light would give better texture to the buds and shape to the vase. Punching up the yellow would make both the buds and vase "pop" a bit more. To my taste, the backgound is still too close and should be blurred more to focus more on the subject especially because the color is adjacent to the subject as opposed to complimentary. A very slight corner or edge "burn" would help with that too. Keep up the good work!

Thanks Louis for your kind suggestions. Yes it was window light. Will try a little burning. kind regards Rina

 

I reworked this one Pl. have a look. Thanks for your input

Rina! I love taking photos of tulips as well. Yours are like painting with lot of sensuality and sweetness. Best regards, Tanya.

Fantastic colors and composition . Congratulations ! Regards Dan .