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I don't know why so few people have commented on these - they seem to be technically good photos, and the model looks really natural in this one, and the one where she is laughing.

 

Makes a change from the pretentious stuff you find on here a lot.

This is another shot from my first photo shoot.

looks like she is having fun. You capture her personality well. What is that light mark under her eye, I don't notice it on the other shots, so I don't think its any kind of skin blemish.

Looks good.

This a good shot, the model is very relaxed which sometimes doesn't happen in fashion/model photography. By you saying that you shot NPS I wonder why? Why didn't you use a Ilford B+W film, preferably Pan F 50. Pan F would have given a finer grain to your picture which is what all fashion/model photography needs. Also it could have been a little more contrasty I think. It would have brough out her face more and I think with this model that it would have flattered her more. Overall good for your first time. Congrats.