View Through The Window

This is a view through the broken window in another

direction...opposite the one posted earlier. I was not satisfied with

the final result; I thought this photo had more potential. Please

point out where I have gone wrong so that I try and improve on this

the next time. Thanks.

Doc, I like the composition and colours. Though I am not good in photoshop, I tried something for you. Just a suggestion.

This is a great shot with good colours but I think I agree with the other suggestion. If this shot had been taken looking directly 90 deg to the windows it might have had more power. I was offered this same suggestion on one of my photos and I really think it makes a difference.