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I WOULD LIKE TO HAVE SOME CRITIQUES PLEASE .

A very nice photo. Maybe it could be a bit brighter.

Good composition. I agree with the previous comment. This is sligtly underexposed. I dont know if this was from a scan of a film, in which case might be just a problem of scanning.

Hi

 

if you have used tone mappig it is strong visibla & unnaturaly

 

...for example there are strong luminosity & colour changes beetwen dark a& light edges.

>> what you thing also about another crop?

 

regards

adam