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Thank you.

She's fabulous, but somehow this doesn't work for me. I can't see it as an organic image--she seems detached from the piano in some way.

 

GOT IT! She has no reflection, or virtually none, on the piano's polished surface.

There's little reflection in this image, but it certainly doesn't detract (and on a technical level, the wrong part of her is lit for a full reflection). In fact, it works as the focus is entirely on her, with nothing to distract but a hint of keyboard. Great work!