portraits/ritratti - i have a vision of you, locked inside my head, it creeps upon my mind.... lotte 2007

please leave a critique

Marco,

 

This is a nice portrait. The woman here smile or playful grin is wonderful. It tells alot about her. This photo achieves what I think a portrait is meant to do. Tell a Story without words.

 

Now to some technical aspects, I thinks the photo need to be a little darker. With it being so light, I think it kinda takes away from the subject. Such as her skin which adds to her charter.

 

Her skin lines don't show as much, especially on the left hand side of the photo. They tend to fade to white, where as a darker photo may add.

 

Well I hope you don't mind but i took the liberty to make some changes.

 

Jeremy

Jeremy, thank you very much for the time you devoted to my picture. I reckon you're quite right in outlining the technical flaws of the shot which, by the way, I'm very glad you did. I guess this is (or should be) what PN is all about, exchanging views, expertise, ideas. thanks again. Marco