My first photo shoot!

Good first upload, well exposed with good textures, if not just a little plain. It looks like her skin should be a little lighter since the white poofty things on her feet aren't completely white. Good start though, and no dust in this one!

And in the land of turmoil a young architect, Ray, rose out of the waters, taking pictures of the bottom halves of girls.

We got another girl shooter here boys.

Interesting choice for dress. I kind of like it.

As for composition, I think I would have cropped the top a little lower. Not below the breasts but a hair lower on them. The current cropping almost highlights the right breast to the distraction of the rest of the print.

I agree that the print should be a little lighter to ensure that the furry foot thingies are true white. I would also like to see a little more of the right hand. For some reason, that little hint of it present in this print bothers me.

The only other thing I don't like is her navel. It doesn't look quite right. There almost appears to be a band-aid stuck over it. Looks funny to me.

Overall I like it. Definitely not the usual.

Good first attempt and a nice find (Model).

Two things.

1. Those legs are a bit too hairy.

2. The contrast needs to be altered.