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Tell me what you think please!

Nicely done portrait Tore, with just the right amount of fill flash to throw in some highlights. I get the feeling though there is too much coat. The entire center of interest is her face & hand. I like the pose also

I think you right, maybe I should try to crop it a bit.

 

Happy hollydays :)

 

Cheers Tore

 

Merry Christmas. I tried a quick crop before I left the previous comment. It really makes her stand out much stronger

-Ken

Tjenare,

The skin treatment is excellent now but I agree with Ken that the key area, the face is quite small of the whole. A tighter crop certainly helps. I wonder - the lights seems to be flatter on her face than around the face which makes me think about the postprocessing ... I think I'd try to shallow the dark end contrast a bit on the scarf and the hairs around her face ... then again ... it's quite good as it is.

God Jul och lyckligt nytt ar,

- Juha

Tjenare Juha :)

 

Thanks for your suggestions, I have not done the post process of this series yet so I will keep it in mind when I do it.

 

 

Merry Christmas and happy new year :)

 

Cheers Tore

 

What a pleasure always to open this page. Perfectly treated images with a profound respect for the subject photographed. I will always treasure your precious advice on sharpness and how to reach it, but I will never attain this level. I guess I will first have to learn how to hold the camera still !

 

A wonderful Christmas and New Year to you and your family,

John

John, you are too kind :)

 

Cheers Tore