Tania

This photo was just trying to illustrate the beauty of her eyes,

like an angel coming out from nowhere!

but why devote only one third of your picture space to such a lovely face? Turn the camera into the vertical "portrait" mode. That should make those eyes show up. Retouch the high lights in the eyes to make them slightly bigger and increase the color saturation in the lips just a touch. Please tell the model I would like to hire her.

In my opinion there is nothing wrong with a portrait in horizontal format. This way the model is given space to "breathe"; also I like the element of green in the background contrasting the model's red hair. And yes, she has beautiful eyes!