Competition...

Thank for looking. The larger much better.

You certainly captured a lot of action here. IMO the focus is great on the water but distracting on the birds (too soft in some spots and too hard in others) and since there are so many of them in such a tight space, that's a bit of a problem. Also, with this much action, I think you've cropped too close and created a busy scene rather than an interesting one. If there's more information in your original, I might use it (especially the swan head that's chopped off). Lastly, I would adjust the colors a little as the birds seem over-saturated in the yellows. An exciting composition nonetheless. Thanks for sharing. Cheers -

Alberta,

 

Thank you for your comments. Here I put full frame of the shot. Please try to crop by your self. Thank you. Best regards. Mikhail.

You're a good sport for uploading the full frame, Mikhail. It isn't the same exact shot, but close enough for me to use PhotoShop and make a few adjustments that might illustrate what I'm thinking: more focus, brighter whites and a fuller frame (and I cloned out a few small bird parts). Food for thought and discussion attached. Wish I had been there. It looks like a lot of fun to photograph and with so much going on, you did well. My favorite part is the duck head tucked under the swan wing - priceless :) Cheers -

Alberta, thank you very much...I realy did put another one...but you did well and I like it. Here you will fing attached my crop and ajustments and I hoop you see my filing of scene...thank again and good luck! Kind regards, Mikahil