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Critiques appreciated.

Beautifully captured, lighting and tones are spot on

 

Graeme

quite a study, Jim

The magic triangle .. you must certainly have heard me rave over this before. Excellent Jim. The only uncertainty for me is your choice of tone and colour, but then the author is always in the best position to make these choices. The hair just a fraction too dark possibly, but that too may have been a desired effect.

I debated the color/tone issue before I posted this. The more I look at it, the more I agree with you. I will probably re-post the foto in the next few days.

 

Jim Phelps

The lighting compliments her nicely. She has done a great job of providing you a nice soft and effortless looking pose. I do agree with John's interpretation of the tones here. I would like to see the background a little more pure which I am sure will bring her skin tone into a pleasing range as well. I look forward to your repost.

 

Best regards,

 

Jim

The re-post is up

Jim,

 

Yes. I prefer this much more. I of course do not know her actual skin tone but I find this interpretation pleasing. I find the highlights on her left breast and ribs more noticeable now. Very pleasing to my eye as well as adding depth to the image.

 

Best regards,

 

Jim

I quite love this one I do... and I'm sure I've mentioned before that I love this model... what a muse she is.