Brie

I had just got my Camera a couple weeks before and this was my first

photo shoot...EVER. I do not have a studio but I've learned a couple

things since. I would love any Critiques. Thank you

The model looks like she has interesting eyes and without some kind of noirish context I'm not sure it serves any purpose to keep her eyes in shadow. A reflector or side fill flash will take care of that.

I would love to see at least one eye. I think this would help make a connection with the viewer. Great start, Laura Larson

Yes, perhaps a bit more light on the one eye and crisper focus. That being said, I like this image in general. A nice relaxed candid.

 

Regards, Todd

Hi Sonia. I kind of like the shadow over her eyes. It gives the shot some mystery. A little different from the usual stuff. Original and quite creative. Nice job ... Ray.

Sonia this is a wonderful image, you may not see those smoldering eyes but you sure can feel them. I agree with Ray very original and very creative. Well done!

Sonia-

 

I love the feeling of mystery in this image from not seeing the models eyes. Plus the bright red lipstick works very well with the muted colors of the rest of the image. Keep up the good work.